A 99 word flash fiction on a prickly subject is the prompt this week over at the carrot Ranch, press Charli to join in make connections or read.
Sissy knew there’d been an interloper, things moved, food consumed under cover of darkness; she’d have them tonight, catch them red handed. Settling down in her chair among the shadow’s she was twitchy jumping at every creak.
Three thirty she heard it, a patter of feet, as they came close she leapt! Knocking a glass to the floor ‘CRASH’ Incensed she scratched and fought. Just then Mark switched on a light. “Sissy, did you bring in a hedgehog”? He promptly chased them out into the cold night, scratched his head picked up the broken glass and returned to bed.
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A lighthearted 99 words, did you get it? do you know who or what Sissy was?Let me know in the comments I love it when you talk.
A fun read!!!
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I will take fun. 😇 come back soon.
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Good suspense. I predicted hedgehog, maybe because I’d just written about echidna. 🙂
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You were a very good guesser *smiles* we both found prickly subjects Norah. 😇
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Thanks, Ellen. 🙂
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Thank you Charli.😇
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I swear our cat used to bring wildlife indoors just to hunt inside the house! I love the perspective from the cat and somehow the phrase “interloper” made me think of cat-speak more so than dog. A fun flash with unexpected prickles!
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Yes correct it was a cat! I am pleased you liked it. 😇
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Oh, I thought it was their intrepid watch dog.
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It could have been but… a sly stalking cat was the culprit this time.😇
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Meow Ellen?
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Ha ha…my you are quick… I suppose that’s why it is called flash or micro fiction. You got it by a whisker sir, by a whisker.
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🙀😘
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