press to join in. Sue Vincent’s picture prompt.
Here is this weeks photo. All.entries to be in by March 22nd.
Stalactites hung like chandeliers from the roof of our cave, the formation split it into two rooms. Since his leaving I had made it welcoming, sweeping the animal waste in a pile, hanging a lantern from a root that pierced the ceiling. The rosy welcoming glow was encouraged by the minerals in the rock that cast a sunset; perfect for this night. Animal skins shone silver on the vine that provided cover.
My heart bounced in my chest, as his shadow fell on the ridge. I trembled and perspired at the shape of him. Picking up the mewing bundle I stood at the entrance and thrust it towards his broad chest and said… “Your gift” With his huge hands he twisted the neck, a crack of splintering bone was heard. A gasp left my throat and I wiped my eyes with trembling fingers. With swift strokes he skinned and gutted it, throwing the debris aside. Taking me roughly in his arms to the inner chamber he reminded me what we were together for.The calf spat and cooked on the fire as we writhed on its soft skin. Now I was his, I had successfully filled his needs and his belly .
I remember my son asking what it was like when we lived in caves. Though I am not quite old enough for that, I think maybe my story would have fit.I bet you thought that bundle was something else… leave me a comment I am dying to know ๐ 😄 ๐ฎ
I’ll get you a comfy chair with a fluffy blanket, a table with good cup of tea with some hobnob’s to soothe you in readiness for your stay. ๐ *mumbles* you better not leave crumbs!
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Excellent! You really had me there, I really did think there was something else in that bundle. Loved the tension and the setting. Very well done!
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I love to twist and try to surprise the reader. Thank you for coming.
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I’ll be popping by more often. I enjoy your writing. ๐
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Great story with a sharp edge of tension. phew!
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Glad you liked it ๐
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Full of sexual overtones. I liked this to the very end.
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Life back then would have been all about procreating. Thank you for reading
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Thanks Sue.
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Nicely done ๐
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Thank you. ๐
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I love your take on the prompt. It does look kind of cosy in that cave, and what could be better than a good meal and a bit of hanky panky!! ๐
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Precisely! *grins*
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Satisfying ending. ; )
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Fulfilling I think.๐
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Hahaha I thought she’d give him a kitten! (why she would do that I don’t know) I like the way she brushes the mess into a corner rather than take it outside.
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My kind of house keeping! I was waiting for someone to think that it was a baby… maybe my imagination is worse than others *rubs chin*
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I think it might be the word ‘mewing’? I associate that with kittens for some reason and because she said ‘gift’ when she handed it over. :0)
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Yep, you scared me, Ellen! Glad it was good old beef they were cooking!
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Nice story! This was a very enjoyable take on the prompt.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for visiting ๐
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Great story! ๐
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Thank you Debbie i hope you come over for another read again soon. ๐
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Yes, I was getting some very strange ideas about cave dwellers. I’m glad you cleared that up.
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Theeehe! My husbands eyes got bigger as I read, he let out the biggest sigh at the end and said he knew all along. *grins*
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A cat?
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Nasty business eating pussies.
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Wicked ๐ even worse eating a calf!!
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Only if you are vegetarian and cave dwellers were carnivorous beings… so science has led us to believe. ๐
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