Florence wears her poppy with pride.
Only a Bloody Mary to sit beside ,
fag a-dangle from painted lips,
burgeoning breasts child bearing hips.
All a-wobble; she waits for the last post.
Lips tremble; as she drinks a silent toast.
A widow of war; his body unfound.
Buried deep beneath foreign ground.
For peace he fought and lost his life,
Bullets, left lonly, a grieving wife.
Alone, eyes all a puddle, she stands,
Silently clasping her shaking hands.
Photo by Maria Orlova on Pexels.com
While, we all remember them.
Do you think my attempt is too fickle for such a poignant rememberance? Leave me a comment its good to talk.
Thanks to the artist of Florence who holds full copyright, giffy for use of tumbling animation. Both poem and poppies are my own.
Hi Ellen, It’s all the more poignant because of the way you’ve handled it. Every picture DOES NOT TELL THE STORY. It certainly spoke to me. xx
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What a wonderful comment thank you.x
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I love that you read it thank you.
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I actually liked this poem (and honestly I don’t like a whole bunch these days 😉 ). Really nice rhythm there, especially in the beginning! x
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Thank you 🌹😊
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Interestingly appropriate and thank you for sharing!
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Thank you for coming☺
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I also found this to be poignant.
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I thank you for your comment and the time you gave. 🌲⚘
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You’re welcome.
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I think it is a beautifully poignant poem Ellen.
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Thank you for your comments, there is a little trepidation when dealing with a subject so raw.
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I think this is wonderful poetry Ellen, and I don’t find it fickle at all. 😊
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Thank you I am pleased it is a worry when you push the boundries. 😇
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Pushing the boundaries is what we do as poets/writers 🙂
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It is but i tread carefully where I can. 😉
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I don’t 🙂 I push those boundaries
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I love the expression in this poem, Ellen. You will see my comment on Facebook.
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So kind of you Robbie. 😇
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