In 1000 words (by the end of each month) using the monthly prompt word. Write a short story, no more than 1000 words. To join in, read the entries and guidelines PRESS HERE. November’s random word is Educate.
Aland worked in artificial intelligence, Luna, two days a week for an Observatory; together they taught the children. They live in a self-sufficient home in the Fens. London was fifteen, Quacey twelve, Diana eleven, Amaris ten, Jaci seven, Candara five, Auberon and Neoma are the two-year-old twins.
London’s raindrop alarm splashed his hair, with a clenched fist to hit the stop button. Last week he tried ignoring it, four drips in and a deluge of freezing water soaked him. He was not best pleased with hanging out bedclothes and remaking the bed; all before school. The schoolroom was down the back of the plot; both Aland and Luna planned the lessons, they had a nursery nurse Martha to help educate Jaci, Candra and the twins.
“Who calls their kid’s such stupid names?” Shouted London, as his fist pummelled the jute wrapped bale in the barn. “Even our bales suck.” He punched hard into the rough cloth. ” Clean this dig that,” punch swipe, his hands were hot and speckled with droplets of blood, fibres clung to the wet grazes. London pulled his forearm across his face and sniffed hard. His brows creased and mouth screwed as he looked out of the hayloft door. From his position he could see Luna, teaching Quacey Diana and Amaris about pond ecosystems; besides the duck pond. Fishing chairs and nets lay with buckets, paper and pencils; cluttering a trestle table. Dad was doing something disgusting in the reedbed across the far side. He should be revising for his exam at the college next week, instead, here he stood, sulkily watching, keeping out-of-the-way. “I won’t stand a chance, the kids who have normal names and normal lives will hate me.” Regardless of the pain, he returned to finish, his punches clean, swift and hard.
Jaci and Candra were painting a frieze with stamps made from potatoes. Martha looked in on what should have been London revising. Her call to Aland was answered swiftly, “Hi, I am sorry to have to tell you; he’s gone again.” She heard a ragged sigh, his voice flat. “Thanks, Martha, any clue? Anything at all?” She could feel the sadness in his tone, “sorry nothing.” Struggling out of his waders he swore as his sock sank in the grey sludge beside the reedbed. Throwing the waders in the old golf cart, he slumped into the driving seat and turned the key. He watched the children with Luna and smiled to himself. A Kyte caught his eye gliding, like a dart; it plummeted. That’s when he saw movement in the hayloft, relief followed by anger. Going into the barn he coughed and stamped, Aland didn’t want to surprise the boy. Soon they were eyeball to eyeball. Aland winced at the sharp hay stabbing his bare legs. “Okay, I am listening.” His lips were pursed his brow furrowed. London shook his head slowly. Aland caught sight of some blood on the boy’s sleeve, picked his arm up to look. “Better go home get that cleaned before your mother has a fit.” London jerked his hand free. He reached the tackle and hook used for lifting and lowering bales; defiantly he stared at his Dad as he abseiled from the loft.
The house was quiet with the children asleep. The only sound was the bats … and the beat of a base carried on the night’s breeze. Lights shone from the schoolroom where London revised to the background of heavy metal; minus the headphones. “That young man is pushing his luck,” Luna had to hold back from banging the mugs into the cupboard, ” Really Aland, we can’t let him get his head; we will lose him.” She dropped her face to her husband’s shoulder. Squeezing her tight his lips pressed to her ear. “We will cope, we’ll find a way to get through to him.” She turned to him, “It needs sorting before his exams … or he will fail.”
London sat in the hayloft watching the Moon; tonight it was almost full. Tomorrow a red Moon would be seen from this vantage point, but the thought of sharing it with his siblings and parents made him mad. He scuffed his boot angrily filling the air with dust. London’s cough disguised the sound of weary boots treading the stairs. For the second time today, Aland faced his angry lad. “You, home, now!” London moved towards the door as his dad grabbed him, “Do not push me, use the stairs.” His shoulders slumped, eyes focused on the floor; his boots thumped the steps purposefully. The boy, closely followed by his Father; left the loft.
Luna and the children were excited, today they prepared food for a moonlit picnic. Dad set up two telescopes, one at the lake the other in the loft. He hoped that Mum’s calculations were correct and the sky clear for the show. Jaci Candra and the twins covered spheres with crumpled tissue with the help of Martha. Quacey. Diana and Amaris wrote stories and poems depicting the moon’s phases. Their fun made London angrier. With wet red cheeks, London came face to face with his father, neither of them expected the other. “You always follow me” London roared, his nose only an inch from Aland’s face. “Sneaking up, spying on every little thing.” His nostrils flared, he snatched and flinched and took off at speed. Alund followed. Twigs cracked, sweat seeped into his eyes but he knew this was crunch time; the boy mustn’t win. Aland’s chest began to tighten his legs trembled, but on he tore. At last, London fell to his knees, breath spent, shoulders twitched and drips of salty tears fell from the end of his nose. Aland flopped on his backside; breathing heavily next to him. His head back; eyes screwed and mouth gaped. Eventually, they talked.
Luna watched as they walked, arms draped across shoulders; she smiled. London sat with his siblings around him. Aland tugged Luna away, hand in hand they walked with heads almost touching. London told the children how each one had been given a name specially chosen for its astrological connections. He told them how lucky they were to live there, together they watched the spectacle before them.
the names as verified in the link are:
Aland = Bright as the Sun (English/Celtic origin)
Luna = Moon
London = Fortress of the moon
Quacey = Moonlight (Scottish 0rigin)
Diane = Goddess of the moon.
Neomea = Full moon
Oberon = Large moon
Ameris = Moonchild ( Irish origin)
Candara = Glowing like the moon
jaci = Moon (American tribal origins)
The above list was compiled from various sources but most are verified in the link below.
Does someone in your family have an unusual or meaningful name? leave me a comment I would love to talk?
You have a beautiful blog. I’d like to visit again to read the wonderful posts:)
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Thank you. X
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Great story! I have a middle name in another language. The translation is something like “strong winter” which i like since then name reminds me of where I’m from and I was born during the winter months.
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A beautiful name one you surely did not get by accident.
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Love this Ellen and the name meanings are fab. Shared this on my reg feature on PainPalsBlog – Monday Magic Inspiring Blogs for You! C x
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I am honoured to be there with you.
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Great post enjoyed it no end.
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Thank you for taking the time 🌹😘
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Thank you.
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Very good Ellen, an extract of something larger or derived purely for the BB, which I’ve not actually done yet…ooops! Name meanings are fascinating for writers too. They can act as personality prompts all by themselves. Great depth with London too. Lots of pent up anger and frustration. 😊
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Nothing like teenage angst to use for story building. Thank you for reading. Gary means Hard or Bold, I believe you to be bold. 🤣😂
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I hear you loud and clear! That’s what caused my hiatus. Teen angst. I’ll run with bold then…although does that work with procrastination 😂😂
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#uck that be bold!
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The names are fab. Just finished a book.called The Seven Sisters where names are important. And I always love Of Mice and Men especially because names are so cleverly selected.
My name is Irish for Golden Princess/ Lady. I like it!
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I would too it is a great name. Both books are beautiful reads. I may have to revisit seven sisters as it has been so long If it is the same one even.
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Seemingly there is a huge series so I am working on getting a second one
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Four of my memory serves me.
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Ive never liked my name, other spellings are far nicer – like Marianne – just googled Marian and found a meaning of “Sea of sorrow” or “Sea of bitterness” another site says “rose petal” then another derived from Miryam – “wished for child” nice story Ellen, well written and nice description.
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I believe it is Miriam, is the wished for child. It is the name in Hebrew of Moses eldest sister. A special name. But we often dislike our name and wish for a more exotic one. I am glad you liked my story … as I like your name😘.
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Thanks Ellen x
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Love the story Ellen!
My full name, Ratinder means Princess of the changing seasons…
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That is a beautiful name. I am pleased you liked my story. 😘
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❤
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A great story, Ellen. I loved the names.
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Did you know …The name Roberta is a German baby name. In German the meaning of the Roberta is:
Famed, bright; shining. Thanks for reading Robbie.
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That is interesting, Ellen. Thank you for letting me know.
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Enjoyed it. Loved the descriptions and London’s feelings and anxiety. I have to get on the ball with Blog Battle this month!!
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Yes I missed you. 🤗 thanks for coming I love your visits.
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I have few more days to pull myself together for BlogBattle and finish NaNo.
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My goodness you can always catch the battle for a read this month and get over NaNo before hitting a new story. 😊 such pressure we put on ourselves.
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Hi Ellen, my name is Anindya, in Indian language it means somebody who is beyond criticism, or simply someone who cannot do anything wrong…..I am trying to live upto it almost on a daily basis…..:)
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What a wonderful name! I of course am beyond criticism too
😂🤣
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:):)…..great to hear that Ellen..
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Not really that was British humour😁😂
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I liked that….:)
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*titters*
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Lovely story Ellen.
My name is Diana, but nothing to do with the moon, just a character in the book Mum was reading as they were convinced I would be a boy and hadn’t banked on the wrong plumbing when I arrived.
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Shows how nice surprises can be, and how much power stories / books have. 😊
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I’m just glad I wasn’t named after the horse, but if Mum or Dad were ever disappointed I wasn’t a boy, they never let on. I always felt loved.
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I am sure you are.
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Great post 😁
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