Her cheeks carry the imprint of diamonds,
Where she pushed her face to see.
What life would be like beyond that fence,
To be welcomed in the land of the free.
Dusty hands grip tight, a heart still full of hope,
Unshed tears make her chin wobble, but determination helps her cope.
She gazes at the fancy dresses the boats being used for fun …
Not to escape in … or for the winds to take their Mum.
People on the other side, oblivious to her watching, or the sadness that it brings.
Play happily in the sunshine, The only diamonds they know, are set in lovers rings.
The photograph (with permission, on loan from Diane Hartnell)
On attending one of the fabulous workshops at the Theatre Royal Bury Saint Edmunds. We were challenged to use pictures as a starting point, to twist the scene and produce a piece of performance for a show called ‘The Other ends.’
The poem above ‘Diamonds,’ is my response. Performed at the Bury arts festival on 19th June. Our group will be on stage between 11am and 12 noon, where we will be accompanied by two choirs and when all the ‘Other Ends’ will be showcased.
I would love to know “have you pushed the boundaries of comfort and put yourself on the stage, if so how did it go?” Leave a comment I just love to chat.
Diamonds have always been the source of so much pleasure and so much pain…Those feelings captured brilliantly by your words…Welcome back 🙂
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Thank you so much. You are my first! Many I am sure would have liked to be told that 😁😆
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My pleasure, Ellen 🙂 xx
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Hi miss you. Nominated you for Sunshine Blogger Award https://youcanalwaysstartnow.wordpress.com/2019/08/22/sunshine-blogger-award/
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Thank you Barbara I really appreciate that you thought of me … I have an award free blog, thoygh I am unable to accept I am hugely flattered.
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Very nice poem. No I’ve never really been on stage, except maybe school choir and graduation. I’m not a confident person.
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I did not even do the school stuff. My goodness this was tough for me.
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Yes it does sound very hard.
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Emotionally, it was horrific. We put ourselves into each piece, no matter the size, if you believe and are investing yourself in that work. Giving something of yourself, it is hard to read it objectively. If you could be objective you would risk loosing the voice. Yep I blubbed 😯😢
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Wow lots of hard work, emotionally and mentally. X
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What an emotional read. Best wishes on your performance. It’s splendid!! ❤
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Thank you, I like splendid very much.
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Given that your words all by themselves brought tears to my eyes, I can only imagine how brilliant the performance will be as the words are acted out.
Thanks to willow21 for giving your writing further exposure.
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What n uplifting wonderful comment. I will thank the lovely Willow post haste. X have a smashing week and please come for a read and a chat anytime. 😘
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This is beautiful, Ellen.
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Hi Ellen, just to let you know, I now have a poetry sharing group on MeWe if you are interested: https://mewe.com/group/5cc950af952bc50f1a26205e
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Thank you for coming commenting and the invite. X
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I am chuffed that you took the time to visit and left a lovely comment. 😘
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This is a wonderful piece Ellen. Well done and good luck for the 19th. 🌹
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I admit to wishing someone else would read it … but thanks for the luck Willow.
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You will be brilliant 💜
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Of course I will. Positive thoughts will kick in. 💟
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Excellent that is the spirit 💜
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Gorgeous poetry Ellen. ❤
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Well lovely lady you can come again. X🙃💚
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And I will Ellen ❤
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enjoyed. When I started reading I thought back and realized I was often the girl looking through the fence.
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Oh no! Well I hopethat you do notfeel like that anymore xx
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Great Poem.. and good luck.
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Thank you for taking the time 😇 much appreciated.
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Welcome happy sunday
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Beautiful Ellen. Best of luck in June.
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I will need it Gloria I will take yours and keep it safe for the day.
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😍
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Well done, Ellen.
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Thanks for your comment Darlene and for sharing.😗
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What wonderful words. Well done, Ellen 😍
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Thank you I hope the audience agrees. X
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You’ll be great xxx
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Once again Ellen has intrigued our minds with wonderment. Diamonds is going to be a very interesting play.
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Thank you for the support. Xx
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