I wished I hadn’t seen him, I squeezed my eyes and prayed that he would disappear once I unscrewed them.
In the forest, Granddad always carried his loaded gun; broken of course, but … shot ready. “Just cos you a girl don’t mean nowt” he would say. “You needs to know, and to do.” Each time I nodded my head, I secretly begged not to find him. In the clearing he glistened with snow. Head held proud, no hurry to go. He looked back the way he had come. I darted forward; a distraction technique. Without a breath his gnarly hand caught my nose and cheek. A backhander he called it, a gentle reprimand. Grabbing my lobe he dragged me, not releasing for a second until home. My face wet, my heart bled but … my conscience clear. We never spoke of our last hunting trip. We neither repeated or apologised. Our last meeting was on his deathbed, our eyes met one last time. Silently he closed his lashless eyes, and nodded his naked head.
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What an interesting blog. I followed you. I hope you visit my blog and maybe follow me too. Hope to see you back Esme’s Senior Salon again.
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I have been to your blog and followed. I thank you for the follow and visit too. I have been with Esme’s blog and facebook group for a few years so am sure you and I will comment again soon. 😇
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OMG. I thought I was in the room with him. Excellent work Ellen,
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What a lovely comment thank you x
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Thank you.
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This is as perfect a story as I’ve ever read.
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What a lovely comment. X
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I meant it!
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Beautifully done, Ellen. I hope Grandad understood in the end.
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That final nod spoke volumes.
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Good 🙂
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I like to think I’d have done the same.
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You would have I am certain.
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If I’d had a granddad who owned a gun (which I didn’t) I don’t suppose he’d have ever tried to get me to go hunting with him in the first place 🙂
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We will never know …but I am glad it was not about me so I would not have had to see.
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You got into the skin of your character though.
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Powerful
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Thank you.
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Amazing story, Ellen. So emotionally profound and complete in the telling.
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I am pleased you liked it.I think it is good to challenge yourself as a writer
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Thanks D. Wallace Peach x
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A beautiful story, he knew you were right 💜
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I think he knew she was. ☺
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Yes indeed 💜
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