
The crop snapped his flank,
the pop spurred him on,
His acclaimed turn-of-foot
would deliver his swansong.

A snort a twitch
The winning post Past
At the final stroke
This race would be his last.

Put out to grass
Racing finished
Time to shine gone
No friends to race
Or bowls of mash
No roar of the crowd or
heads to clash.

In this meadow
Grinding grass all day,
does he swat memories like flies away.
does he miss the cheers
Strings of horses nose to tail
Or is he happy to watch the red Kite sail.


This was for Charli Mills 99 word flash fiction prompt press https://carrotranch.com/2021/09/17/september-16-flash-fiction-challenge-2/ to join in or simply read all the responses.
Love this one – awesome. Thank you so much for sharing your post at our Senior Salon Pit Stop linkup ending this Saturday, October 31.
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Thank you Esme xxx
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Reflections from one who ran the race. Lovely, Ellen!
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Thank you.x
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This one is definitely for printing.
Pure, true, exactly how retired horses are. Watching the red kite.
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That is a lovely comment xx
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I bet he misses it and is happy to take it easy too. Cool perspective.
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Thanks D. X
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He is happy he is free
He spends his time happily.
No more traveling no more stress
No more whip or fear, just grass to press.
💜💜💜💜💜
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If only we spoke horse then we would know.
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Yes indeed we would and also if I was not scared sick I’d get close enough to ask it 💜
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All of us run races in life, eh?
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But for racehorses it is their life.
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True.
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I love to see horses grazing in the fields. Loved this Ellen.
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Thank you it does make you wish you knew what they thought. X
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Kind of sad at first, but I don’t think he will miss the aches and pains from the constant training and racing. Hopefully his owners will give him the love and attention he deserves.
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Thank you for reading Walt. My Father was a jockey both flat and steeplechase so it just had to happen. X
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You’re very welcome Ellen.
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